December 21, 2024

32 thoughts on “John’s Pursuit of Success in America: Creative Stories #1

  1. Hello,
    Nice story. I’d like it to be more long. John is a hard worker and clever man. He tries winning his life and supports his family.

  2. Well, I found the story interesting, since it speaks of a reality that sometimes other people do not fully understand. Well, I wouldn´t change anything about the story because I think it has a purpose. If had the opportunity to change the story or add something, it would be maybe more details, but in itself I think it´s fine. What I understood from this story is that there will always be obstacles. The second thing is to take the oppotunity when you have it. The third thing is not to be conformist and keep improving. And finally this story tells us about a reality, which is the fact and the desire to be looking for the dream of being better and feeling fulfilled as a person. But really, everyone´s dream is relative, everyone has their own dreams and goals and their own obstacules.

  3. What I liked about the story is how he managed to get ahead despite his start, although I wish he had found a job as an engineer, I would follow the story with the reunion with his family and friends.

  4. I like this story because it tells a story of a young person who immigrated to the U.S. He was lucky, energetic, and worked hard. He encountered unexpected events and overcame them. His marriage is based on the comfortable rather than on romantic love, a way that many young people choose. He did not have another choice. That shows that we should work hard and accept reality and our fate to be happy.

  5. The story of John is a good example for the immigrants. Despite of his bachelor’s degree in mechanical engineering in his country, he gets a job in a library in the United States. He has a stable life and support his family. In America, there are many opportunities for everyone. If you have hard work and the patient, you will success.

  6. i enyoy the story is good, John fought for what he wanted, to find a good job and live the life of his dreams, however I would change the marriage because he did it very quickly.

  7. I like the story. All the stories that tells the life of the persons are very interesting.
    That’s the life We have to fight for us, to find a good job, a person who loves and enjoy a good life.

  8. I like this story because it is an example of struggle, and overcoming and that we have to work very hard to achieve our goals.

  9. I enjoyed the John’s story, I think his story is the story of almost all immigrants. I think I wouldn’t change anything because we all have to learn something new, to have more job opportunities.

  10. This story is of a persona who wants get ahead, but in the way encounter many obstacles. Only shoulding working hard for attain his goals.

  11. I think of this History is wonderful because John was working hard to come true his dreams and he did it. I like in this history that John got a job but I would have liked that he could go to more dates with Katie.

  12. I like the history because, this is it one of those exemples the we can go to the goal.
    Continue to learn englihs ,

  13. when there are dreams you can achieve many things, working and preparing are given the opportunities and have the love of the people we love.

  14. Nice story. Is a good example for the immigrants, Jhon tries hard, studies and works, and tries to support his family, In America, there are many opportunities for everyone. All immigrants must follow John’s example to achieve their dreams in America.

  15. I like the history because talk about a successful person, who is a immigrated to the U.S.
    He work ready hard, its a good example of self-improvement.

  16. The story is good and romantic at the same time. John worked really hard to complete his course and finely he got the job and got married with the women he loved.

  17. I saw that how John success in America. He has a dream and has tried to come true his dream.
    Most important things are he didn’t stop to learn English skills.

  18. I think that is very important to continue in the life, John improve skills in English and he can get a better job, a job of full time and then, I think is good to get a girlfriend and thinking married, because this is a very important motivation to be better every day.

  19. Very nice story.
    I like it is interesting because the story talks about how we all migrate to this country in search of better opportunities

  20. I like the history because John was very realistic about his goals. John is very humble person. John never stop dreaming about have something good in his life.

  21. I can see about the story is a very nice and interesting because John is a hard worked, I wouldn’t change anything he wants to be successful in his life he has a goal, and he is improving in everything each day he got a better job, and he goes to learn English to school That’s we should do to be succesful in our life.

  22. ”Jon’s pursuit of success in America”
    I went through the story. I just loved it.It is an engaging and holding my attention throughout the reading. The story made me think that hard work, honesty, motivation and dedication is the key to success and one can achieve his goal with these qualities.

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